Comments on: How to Write Articles to Market your Online Business

By: ML

ML — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 13:40:59 +0000

After auto-pilot, it should be:

… – meaning that you can operate your business without involving yourself for most of the time.

The second paragraph sounds like you’re desperate to convince people. A lighter tone would be better, for example:

As a company concerned for your well-being and security, we would like to emphasize (British English: emphasise) that other parties which advertise jobs that bring instant profits without you having to work are scams.

Does the phrase "we teach you how to do it in step-by-step" mean that your company is a) teaching how to build an online business, OR b) teaching how to auto-pilot? If it is a), then I would suggest this:

Our company will teach you the tips and tricks of creating a superior e-business domain from scratch in a step-by-step approach.

If what you are trying to say is b), then my suggestion is

Our company will teach you how to manage your web business on auto-pilot successfully in a step-by-step manner

Hope I’ve been helpful
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By: beyond_malachi

beyond_malachi — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 13:38:59 +0000

Suggested changes:

"…auto-pilot – means that…" should be "…auto-pilot – meaning that…"

"…keep this in your mind…" should be "…keep this in mind…"

"…putting any efforts…" should be "…putting in any effort…"

Other than that (and the spelling), it’s pretty well written.
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By: rasida.ahmed

rasida.ahmed — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 13:36:59 +0000

Ladies & Gents, I am telling about this person, he is writing a .article. He need grammer,spelling, language& other many thing , even any body can write the full article, no objection,no objection & no objection,even give him full thanks ,every body pray to god for him.Thanks a lot ladies & Gents.
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By: thedeadpoet

thedeadpoet — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 13:34:59 +0000

To whom it may concern,

Should you encounter a company claiming the ability to earn money immediately after joining them, we urge you not to do this. More often than not, we have found such company’s to be dishonest and feel it would benefit you to not take the risk.

Thanking you,
[insert name here]
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By: darkrhetoric

darkrhetoric — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 13:32:59 +0000

Any online business will require effort at the start. But soon you should be able to run your business on "auto-pilot." It will operate without much of your involvement. We teach you how to do this, step by step. Dear Reader, keep in mind that if anyone tells you that you will earn money immediately after joining without any effort, this is a lie!
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By: None N

None N — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 08:30:46 +0000

Please fix this for me…I really need help….?
I’m writing an article about online marketing. I need somebody to fix the grammar mistakes i have and make sentences easy to underatand….Do not worry about the spellings, i will fix them later……English is not primary language thats why i screw up….
Do not re-write the whole thing…Just fix it here and there

Parapgraph:
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Any Online business will require effort at the beginning but after a short while you should be able to run your business on auto-pilot – means that it can operate without much involvement from you. We teach you to how to do it in step-by-step.

Dear Reader, keep this in your mind If anybody or any company tells you to join them and you will start earning money immideatly without putting any efforts on your behalf at all, you must know this is just a plain LIE.

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Thanks Alot Ladies and Gents…